Reflection

Today’s lesson on writing a body paragraph was very interesting. I learned that I have a problem with finding my claim and giving suporting details to back it up. It is extremely difficult for me to not overthink the prompt and to wonder off of topic. I realized that I have to be wise on what claims I choose to back up my thesis statement because I will need to be able to have a claim that I can adress in different ways and from multiple events.

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